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When life begins to fade ~ Book 1 ~chapters 1 & 2 up!


Okay,...So i was sitting at the computer and all the sudden this idea popped in my head. This is about a pack of wolves who go through a hard time to survive. That why its called "When life begins to fade".

Chapter 1A young pup padded through the dark forest. It didnt seem very safe out there by itself.
 A faint scream echoed through the forest.
Amwolf! Amwolf looked around. It was his mothers voice,
 for sure. He heard a noise through the bushes. Mama? He yelped. Suddenly, a large red eyed monster came out.
 It looked at the small pup. Opening its large mouth, showing its massive teeth. About to grab the pup. But something moved it.
Mom!  Amwolf yowled.
He could smell..Blood? He heard his mothers sweet voice. Run! Amwolf shivered. He turned and ran. The pup ran as fast as it could. But he tripped and landed into a thicket. The hopeless puppy was stuck.

 
Chapter 2Honi padded out  of a small cave and smelled the fresh air. She let out a long sigh as the wind gently pushed on her pelt. The sun was still rising. Honi stretched and yawned.
Her ear twitched as she heard a voice.
Good morning, Honi. Jei said with a smile. Honi turned and blushed. Oh! Hello jei! She said. Your usually never up this early. Jei walked over and sat down by her. He wrapped his tail around her shoulder.
I couldnt sleep. He admitted. Something was bothering me. He smelled the air. Do you smell..Blood? He asked. Honi looked at him and then smelled the air. Y-Your right! She gasped and stood up. Lets go check it out.
The forest was dark. They padded through it and followed the horrible scent. They gasped and saw Rudi laying on the ground, her pelt stained in red. Honi ran over. Rudi! She yowled, tears rolling down her cheeks. Shes still breathing. Jei said. He could see the movement. He walked over and put her on his back. Lets take her
back. If we hurry we can save her. Honi nodded and followed him. She stopped at a heartbreaking scent. I smell more blood and.. Tears rolled down
 her cheeks.
Amwolf She said softly. She turned away from jei and ran. Amwolf! She yowled. She stumbled upon a thicket and looked at it. A small blue-grey pelt stuck out. She dug her face
 in it and pulled out the half-dead pup.
She nudged him gently. Amwolf. Honi licked the
small pups wounds. She grabbed him in her mouth and walked away, her tail dragging
on the ground.


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RE: When life begins to fade ~ Book 1


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                                  M= Male   F=Female 
                                           
Pups:
Adalwolf- A brown pup who is noble to her pack -F
Amwolf- A blue-grey pup who like to chase birds- M
                                     Wolfs in training:
Ayame- A golden wolf with read eyes(Mentor: Chinua) F
pha- A white wolf with deep blue eyes(Mentor:Fridolf) M
Bhangi- A grey wolf with one ripped ear and a scar over its left eye(mentor:Honi) M
Buzcertlar- A grey wolf with light green eyes. Likes to goof around(mentor:Gorg) M
Cailean- Gold wolf with red eyes(mentor:Jei) F
                                           Hunters:
Chinua- A smallish grey wolf with a white stomach and red eyes. M
Conner- A white wolf with blue eyes. F
Eyolf- A greenish greyish wolf with yellow eyes. M
Fridolf- A orange wolf who doesn't like to get involved. F
Gorg- A fierce grey wolf. M
                                           Fighters:
Honi- A brown wolf with dark spots on the back. F
Jei- A dark blueish wolf with red eyes. M
Kadzait- A orange wolf who loves to wonder around
Kiyiya- A fierce wolf who loves the full moon. F
                                        Message wolf:
Botolf- A dark grey wolf who delivers messages. M
                                            Nurses:
Rudi- Young thin wolf who is always sickly. (pup:Amwolf) F
Ylva- Brown wolf who is sisters with Rudi. F
                                             Alpha:
Zeus- Black wolf with red eyes. (Pup:Adalwolf) M



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Chapters!
Chapter 1A young pup padded through the dark forest. It didnt seem very safe out there by itself.
 A faint scream echoed through the forest.
Amwolf! Amwolf looked around. It was his mothers voice,
 for sure. He heard a noise through the bushes. Mama? He yelped. Suddenly, a large red eyed monster came out.
 It looked at the small pup. Opening its large mouth, showing its massive teeth. About to grab the pup. But something moved it.
Mom!  Amwolf yowled.
He could smell..Blood? He heard his mothers sweet voice. Run! Amwolf shivered. He turned and ran. The pup ran as fast as it could. But he tripped and landed into a thicket. The hopeless puppy was stuck.

 
Chapter 2Honi padded out  of a small cave and smelled the fresh air. She let out a long sigh as the wind gently pushed on her pelt. The sun was still rising. Honi stretched and yawned.
Her ear twitched as she heard a voice.
Good morning, Honi. Jei said with a smile. Honi turned and blushed. Oh! Hello jei! She said. Your usually never up this early. Jei walked over and sat down by her. He wrapped his tail around her shoulder.
I couldnt sleep. He admitted. Something was bothering me. He smelled the air. Do you smell..Blood? He asked. Honi looked at him and then smelled the air. Y-Your right! She gasped and stood up. Lets go check it out.
The forest was dark. They padded through it and followed the horrible scent. They gasped and saw Rudi laying on the ground, her pelt stained in red. Honi ran over. Rudi! She yowled, tears rolling down her cheeks. Shes still breathing. Jei said. He could see the movement. He walked over and put her on his back. Lets take her
back. If we hurry we can save her. Honi nodded and followed him. She stopped at a heartbreaking scent. I smell more blood and.. Tears rolled down
 her cheeks.
Amwolf She said softly. She turned away from jei and ran. Amwolf! She yowled. She stumbled upon a thicket and looked at it. A small blue-grey pelt stuck out. She dug her face
 in it and pulled out the half-dead pup.
She nudged him gently. Amwolf. Honi licked the
small pups wounds. She grabbed him in her mouth and walked away, her tail dragging
on the ground.


-- Edited by Simba at 04:55, 2008-12-25

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Okay. Ya'll can post now =3

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Chapter one and two up! sorry there so short. I'm not good at starting a story. As i go on it will get better ;)

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Those are awesome chapters! I can't wait for more! Poor Amwolf D:

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Thank X3

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will there be more soon? :3

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Maybe :o. I'll try to write more soon X3.

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Cool! =DDD

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